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Post by mystery_creature2 on Jul 19, 2004 4:37:44 GMT -8
A place I’d like to be, I really must admit, Has lots of lovely sunshine Or sometimes stars in it. Some is green or white or pink, With fish or spots or stripes It’s got muddle, mess and mayhem Of different sizes or types. There’s lots of people in it Who all mean much to me, In fact by now you may have guessed They’re all my family Outdoors there is a wonderland Full of lions and magic things You can make up some adventures Or eat food that mother brings Inside there are police Who want to lock you in, In your mind life is amazing You can do anything’<br> I like to spend some time there Talking or having a laugh Cheering on the football Or pouring myself a bath A place I’d like to be That would come top in any test I hope you think the same That my home is just the best ;D
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Post by surferginny on Jul 19, 2004 7:25:32 GMT -8
I like it :claps: very good!!
GG
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Post by iluvhalloween88 on Jul 19, 2004 17:31:29 GMT -8
I agree, that one's good
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Post by felicia on Jul 20, 2004 0:55:44 GMT -8
I love it,well done:thumbs up:!
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Post by krisconcepcion19 on Jul 23, 2004 1:27:52 GMT -8
Did you write that mystery? It's good.
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Post by guardian_angel786 on Jul 23, 2004 15:31:50 GMT -8
thatz a good ! ;D...did u write it?!
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Post by mystery_creature2 on Aug 4, 2004 12:09:57 GMT -8
yeah i wrote it
glad you like i
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Post by raz_stars on Aug 5, 2004 23:03:28 GMT -8
whow its really very gd mystery! great work!
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Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 6, 2004 20:27:15 GMT -8
it's a very likable poem!!! it makes ppl feel happy about their family!
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