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life
Jul 16, 2004 7:36:31 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Jul 16, 2004 7:36:31 GMT -8
Life.
Life isn’t about the bad things that happen.
It’s about the good things.
It’s about the air in your lungs,
The blood running through your veins.
It’s about the feel of rain on your skin,
The darkness of the sky at night,
And walking across damp grass.
It’s about the salty taste of the sea,
The smell of honey soaked air,
And balmy summer evenings.
It’s about the sound of the morning chorus,
The sun setting over the ocean,
And crisp mountain air.
It’s about the colour of roses,
The sweet smoothness of chocolate,
And the clarity of winter evenings.
It’s about the luck of being alive,
The pure chance that made you happen.
Being thankful for anything and everything,
No matter how small.
The beating of your heart.
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Jul 16, 2004 9:07:58 GMT -8
Post by beautifulchildslove on Jul 16, 2004 9:07:58 GMT -8
Oh wow! That's great!  Do you mind if I send that one to my friends as well? |
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Jul 16, 2004 10:14:53 GMT -8
Post by fullbloom720 on Jul 16, 2004 10:14:53 GMT -8
That's good! Did you write that yourself? |
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Jul 16, 2004 23:43:19 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 16, 2004 23:43:19 GMT -8
it seems like a very....very I don't know how to say it...deep feeling.I didn't reaad the whole lot,but it's great!
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Jul 19, 2004 0:54:20 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Jul 19, 2004 0:54:20 GMT -8
Yeah i wrote it myself. Go ahead and send it if you want. I was in quite a reflective mood when I wrote it, as you can probably tell! ;D
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Jul 23, 2004 15:34:43 GMT -8
Post by guardian_angel786 on Jul 23, 2004 15:34:43 GMT -8
o kool..u wrote it urself!!...thatz good!!
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Jul 24, 2004 16:40:21 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 24, 2004 16:40:21 GMT -8
It's emtional.......
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Jul 25, 2004 14:12:44 GMT -8
Post by surferginny on Jul 25, 2004 14:12:44 GMT -8
..I agree.
GG
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Jul 29, 2004 8:16:22 GMT -8
Post by pinkpiggy777 on Jul 29, 2004 8:16:22 GMT -8
its really good... just like Felicia_luv_tv said.. its kinda hard to put your finger on the right word to explain it all... but good job!!!
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Aug 1, 2004 9:25:15 GMT -8
Post by sorcha55bunny on Aug 1, 2004 9:25:15 GMT -8
its a really deep poem, i really like it
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Aug 6, 2004 20:29:10 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 6, 2004 20:29:10 GMT -8
it's so cool and real:)
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Aug 21, 2004 11:29:55 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 21, 2004 11:29:55 GMT -8
everyone luved you poems, they thought they were great mystery!!! it was my best issue yet!!! ;D |
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Aug 22, 2004 12:44:18 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Aug 22, 2004 12:44:18 GMT -8
Thanks everyone. About the magazine - can I see it?
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Aug 22, 2004 12:51:30 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 22, 2004 12:51:30 GMT -8
yea, i thought i sent it to you, i'll try it again though:)
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Aug 22, 2004 12:59:19 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Aug 22, 2004 12:59:19 GMT -8
Well it hasn't arrived  !!! How perculiar. I'll Pm you my e-mail again, becasue I probably typed it wrong!!! |
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Aug 22, 2004 13:25:52 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 22, 2004 13:25:52 GMT -8
it's in an attachment you have to open it, if your comp won't let attachments i will send it not as one:)
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Do you mind if I send that one to my friends as well?
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