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Flower
Jul 17, 2004 1:50:31 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 17, 2004 1:50:31 GMT -8
Flower flower grow and grow, Set your petals to and fro, Stretch your leaves to the sky, That's so beautiful my o my! Attract the bees and butterflies, But not bugs and houseflies, Like the rafflesia that smell rotten, And make sure your nectar gets eaten, So the butterflies will not be hungry, And the bees will not be angry! Just trying...i know it's very bad,I'm just bad at composing poems!  |
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Flower
Jul 17, 2004 11:50:26 GMT -8
Post by fullbloom720 on Jul 17, 2004 11:50:26 GMT -8
No, that's not bad...I think it's pretty good! I just started to take up the hobby of writing poetry...Usually when Im actually in the mood to write, my poems turn out good.
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Flower
Jul 17, 2004 19:11:43 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 17, 2004 19:11:43 GMT -8
No, that's not bad...I think it's pretty good! I just started to take up the hobby of writing poetry...Usually when Im actually in the mood to write, my poems turn out good. That's good.... |
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Flower
Jul 23, 2004 15:35:59 GMT -8
Post by guardian_angel786 on Jul 23, 2004 15:35:59 GMT -8
wow...u wrote that!?!?...thatz preety good!! ;D
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Flower
Jul 24, 2004 16:38:52 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 24, 2004 16:38:52 GMT -8
You call this good?!I can believe my ears...to me that's the worst poem in the world.
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Flower
Jul 29, 2004 8:20:48 GMT -8
Post by pinkpiggy777 on Jul 29, 2004 8:20:48 GMT -8
You call this good?!I can believe my ears...to me that's the worst poem in the world.  ... hmmm... its not that bad... [glow=red,2,300]its great!!![/glow] what are you talking about  saying that its the worst poem in the world! well even though you dont like it i think its well written. good job on your poem |
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Flower
Jul 30, 2004 0:40:24 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Jul 30, 2004 0:40:24 GMT -8
Really,i didn't think of anything when I did that,that is no good to me,but I'm happy you all like the cooking one.
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Flower
Aug 6, 2004 20:30:22 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 6, 2004 20:30:22 GMT -8
not at all it's very nice!!! ;D
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Flower
Aug 7, 2004 23:48:45 GMT -8
Post by felicia on Aug 7, 2004 23:48:45 GMT -8
Thank you!You made my day!
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Flower
Aug 8, 2004 1:02:07 GMT -8
Post by Icesong927 on Aug 8, 2004 1:02:07 GMT -8
You did a really good job.
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... hmmm... its not that bad... [glow=red,2,300]its great!!![/glow] what are you talking about 
saying that its the worst poem in the world! well even though you dont like it i think its well written. good job on your poem
