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Rose
Aug 10, 2004 6:49:12 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Aug 10, 2004 6:49:12 GMT -8
Ok, this doesn't really have a proper poem rhythm, but it means a lot to me.
Strange.
A rose with so
sharp-a-thorns,
can, when picked
be so soft,
with petals like
reams of silk,
torn to shreds,
and taken
with a gust,
and born unto the wind.
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Rose
Aug 10, 2004 15:43:14 GMT -8
Post by surferginny on Aug 10, 2004 15:43:14 GMT -8
Its good!!I always like to write pems about nature.
GG
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Rose
Aug 10, 2004 19:55:21 GMT -8
Post by puppyprincessgrl on Aug 10, 2004 19:55:21 GMT -8
that's a good one mystery, can i put that one in my mag, i think ppl will like it;)
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Rose
Aug 15, 2004 3:49:09 GMT -8
Post by mystery_creature2 on Aug 15, 2004 3:49:09 GMT -8
yeah sure. I think it sounds better when it's read out loud - it has a kind of rhythm that only comes out when spoken.
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Rose
Aug 20, 2004 10:33:19 GMT -8
Post by fullbloom720 on Aug 20, 2004 10:33:19 GMT -8
Good job, mystery!  |
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