Triumph Over Death

[beautifulchildslove]

Here's a little poem I wrote in my spare time- not the best I've ever written, but it's still ok!




Triumph Over Death

Can anyone triumph over death?
I didn't always think so.
When I watched her
As she lay, with failing breath.
Not truly alive- this I know.
And the doctors were
All around the bed.
I didn't know then
That you could triumph over death.

But there is one
Who did just that.
He died for me
On Calvary.
He died that I
May live in Him
And in Him will I always be alive.

He rose again
On the third day.
He showed that death
Cannot triumph over Him.
He endured the pain
That all may live.
Forever, in His holy name.

And as I watched
Her give in
I know she did not die.
True, she is no longer on earth
But in a better place.
I know she is alive in His name
Forever.
And that I will see her again
Someday.
All because Jesus triumphed over death.



I used a few different writing styles in this poem, so it's pretty interesting... Hope you like it!

[puppyprincessgrl]

i like it, ws that about your friend how had lukemia? could i use it in the mag??

[beautifulchildslove]

sure you can use it... actually she didn't die! This is what it feels like to lose someone, though. I give enough advice to people that I can get the emotions without actually having to go through the experience!

[puppyprincessgrl]

oh, well that's good, at first i thought your friend died, i am glad she didn't:)