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[nftysqrt69]

Here is just a poem I wrote like a day ago. Haha I can't tell if it makes complete sense but thats ok.


Your hand slips into mine
our fingers intertwine
My mind floods with madness
and I'm suffocating in emptiness
You've captured my soul
leaving me with a black hole
Our lips touched gently
I can only remember faintly
A time when I felt loved
all my angers are unsolved
That days sweet tune
on that rainy afternoon
My dreams become so real
as if its you I truly feel
Fingertips on my cheek
drawing a line and making me weak
A teardrop falls from the sky
with no answer of why
Your love was just a formality
in and out of your reality
Time dances across my mind
twirling becomes spinning making me blind
My memories have faded
And have left me jaded
Trapped in the middle
between your love and my riddle
I've become exposed
After it was composed
Scarred to breath or even move
The warmth of your touch can only prove
I've lost it all and Im not here
Its all a dream, you are no where near

[fullbloom720]

Lol poems don't have to make complete sense but actually yours pretty much does. I like it, great job! It's deep.

[princessbecky]

I love it!

[nftysqrt69]

Thanks for the comments! Sometimes the words pour out of me and they make sense and sometimes they don't but thats ok lol. At least this one came together on how I was feeling at the time I wrote it.