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Post by gaudianprincess on Mar 24, 2005 4:31:33 GMT -8
In the distance I see a shimmering light It reminds me of a sky of blazing sapphires As I walk closer it is not what I believed it to be, But instead the Moon shining off of the most enchanting lake It is Mystical, and I stand here in awe I see faeries dancing in the glow of the Moon The waterfall is sparkling in a shower of diamonds, And unicorns are bathing in the cool, clear Water As the heat from the dragon Fire embraces the Earth in warmth The Air was refreshingly calming to my soul My senses awake amid the power of the night The reality of it all is mesmerizing to my spirit I sense it being part of my essence from now until the end of existence
November 27, 2002 Published in "On the Wings Pegasus" From Famous Poets Society
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Post by boycrazier2 on Mar 26, 2005 8:12:28 GMT -8
i love it! it is so beautiful!
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Post by faerieprincess720 on Apr 3, 2005 9:40:38 GMT -8
i love it. it is so beautiful ad really draws the image.
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Post by fullbloom720 on Aug 4, 2005 13:55:55 GMT -8
It's great! It has like a mystical sense to it.
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Post by gaudianprincess on Oct 27, 2005 20:42:48 GMT -8
Thank you for the replies ...I am so sorry it took 7 months to respond Be Well
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Post by fairprincess15 on Nov 6, 2005 17:12:59 GMT -8
wow that was very nice did you do that?
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Post by gaudianprincess on Nov 20, 2005 16:53:59 GMT -8
Yes, I wrote this Thank you
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Post by fairy_tale_girl64 on Nov 20, 2005 17:56:38 GMT -8
that was very very good...you can always tell when something is well written..it paints a picture for all that read and i could see your diamond waterfalls and sapphire sky..very very nice
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Post by gaudianprincess on Nov 21, 2005 12:54:17 GMT -8
hehehehe...well, thank you very much...I have not wrote anything near that since I wrote it, in fact I have not written anything since March of this year...I feel my muse has left me and I can not find her again...Which is really hard because writting has been the only outlet for me in 20 years...Your comment means a lot to me.. Be Well and Well Just Be YOU , Jazzmyn
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