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Post by queencarlina on Apr 17, 2005 6:46:34 GMT -8
~The sun sprayed sparkles on Faerie land. Fyora, the queen faerie, gazed upon her palace, a smile upon her lips, her eyes the color of bright purple flowers, lovely as a sunset. Her pale lavender gown glistened in the sunlight, the jewels glittering, while her beautiful crown sat upon her head, hinting the gracefulness of the queen. But, while Fyora sat peacefully on her royal throne, she did not notice a tiny, slight disturbance in her kingdom...~
Like it? The beggining of a new story....Please don't copy, anyone.
Tell me what you think!!
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Post by fullbloom720 on Apr 18, 2005 13:26:51 GMT -8
Wow that's a great start for a story, dolphindreamer! It has a lot of detail and a splendid style of writing..  When you're done with your story be sure to post it all! I would like to read it. |
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Post by queencarlina on Apr 18, 2005 16:53:09 GMT -8
 Thanks, fullbloom! Glad to hear that you like it!
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Post by boycrazier2 on Apr 20, 2005 6:06:38 GMT -8
great idea! can't wait to read about the disturbance
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Post by Frogs_playing_SB on Apr 20, 2005 13:11:51 GMT -8
I really like that. It sounds interesting. I can't wait to hear the rest.
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Post by queencarlina on Apr 22, 2005 16:50:30 GMT -8
Thanks so much guys! i'll let you know when I have the rest of the story out! GLad to hear your opinions! ;D
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Post by faerieprincess720 on May 22, 2005 11:26:55 GMT -8
very descriptive and beautiful!! |
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Post by aiddaly12 on Sept 4, 2005 17:10:20 GMT -8
it kept me in suspence and i know something about books(im only 14 and ive read more than 2 mil.not kidding)
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Post by fairprincess15 on Dec 17, 2005 12:04:27 GMT -8
hey have you finished the story?i would like to read some more
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Post by leila_chew on Dec 22, 2005 17:14:21 GMT -8
That's a great story starter, dolphin! I love it!  |
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When you're done with your story be sure to post it all! I would like to read it. 
Thanks, fullbloom! Glad to hear that you like it!
