Poems I wrote 4 School

[boycrazier2]

Sweet Little Tweet
There was a bird named Little Tweet
Everything she ate became sweet
An orange cat would chase
Tweet would fly with grace
Little Tweet was a parakeet
(Limerick)

High up Here
Swoosh
this is a leafy place
where children ascend
where the twittering of bluebirds echo (echoes?)
Kids
have stepped here
gazed here
sighed here
relaxed here
spoken here of peacefulness, of nature,
of breathtaking things.
When you come,
come quickly,
rise quickly,
decline quickly,
be mindful of the fears of others,
this is a leafy place,
swoosh.
(teacher wrote out layout. we filled in the blanks)

[faerieprincess720]

ooo, i like the first one, it's very cute ;D and the second one wasn't bad. they are very cute! good job

[fullbloom720]

Cool poems, boycrazier! I think echoes is the proper word - where you had it in parentheses lol. Just to help out. Anyway, I like both of your poems!