|
|
Dancer
Feb 27, 2006 21:01:14 GMT -8
Post by beautifulchildslove on Feb 27, 2006 21:01:14 GMT -8
"Dancer"
Watch me now
In warm limelight.
I take the leap -
And fall.
The crowd gasps,
And I bury my head
In shame,
Because when your life
Is on display,
It's so hard not to fall.
|
|
|
|
Dancer
Mar 3, 2006 17:03:30 GMT -8
Post by fullbloom720 on Mar 3, 2006 17:03:30 GMT -8
Short, simple, but good!! Great job, beautifulchildslove.
|
|
|
|
Dancer
Mar 7, 2006 17:32:58 GMT -8
Post by serrenity20 on Mar 7, 2006 17:32:58 GMT -8
yeah! Great job beautiful!
|
|
|
|
Dancer
Mar 8, 2006 19:21:44 GMT -8
Post by beautifulchildslove on Mar 8, 2006 19:21:44 GMT -8
Thank you!
|
|
|
|
Dancer
Mar 24, 2006 14:00:49 GMT -8
Post by gaudianprincess on Mar 24, 2006 14:00:49 GMT -8
Short and to the point...I love it
Keep writing beautiful...you are talented
|
|
|
|
Dancer
Apr 2, 2006 11:13:47 GMT -8
Post by leila_chew on Apr 2, 2006 11:13:47 GMT -8
Love it! You could become an expert poet and write poetry books or something in the future...or even now!  |
|
|
|
Dancer
Apr 3, 2006 20:23:25 GMT -8
Post by beautifulchildslove on Apr 3, 2006 20:23:25 GMT -8
Wow, thank you, that's a huge complement!  |
|
[My5:]
